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So this is an idea that came to me during some conversations with my friend :icondoozer73: who also encouraged me to try a first-person narrative.  So here it is...

Preview image created by :iconraptorqparx: and added 9/12/16.

Please leave me comments and feedback especially as this is a writing style I've not done before!!

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

THE SHOES is a wonderfully imaginative and well-written story that should appeal to readers who like stories that are "edgy", but are not filled with gruesomeness and horror. The author provides enough information that the reader has an understanding of what's going on, while at the same time, she keeps it moving at a pace to maintain interest. She gets an "A+" for original thought and an interesting story line. Evilness lurks. Bad things happen. Do any of us know the consequences of our actions? Especially when acting on our quirky, lustful impulses? Denise has found herself in a pickle, and I, for one, will be interested in seeing where all of this leads to.