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In March, I ran a 'Teamwork' contest, which can be found here:
wondercuria-dd.deviantart.com/…
had one of the top entries, which was this:
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She asked that I create a story based on this entry, as her prize for entering the contest.
So here it is! And a late Happy Birthday as well
DD
Ultra Woman is the OC of
White Owl is the OC of
Curia is my own OC and Wonder Woman is the property of DC Comics.
And as for the Gleezians...I know they have been featured in images done by
but not sure where else you can find them!
wondercuria-dd.deviantart.com/…
had one of the top entries, which was this: She asked that I create a story based on this entry, as her prize for entering the contest.
So here it is! And a late Happy Birthday as well
DD
Ultra Woman is the OC of
White Owl is the OC of
Curia is my own OC and Wonder Woman is the property of DC Comics.
And as for the Gleezians...I know they have been featured in images done by
but not sure where else you can find them!Mature
© 2014 - 2024 Curia-DD
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactCards on the table 1st. I liked this story but then I like the picture this story comes from.
Right on with the critique.
The story is a good length, not long before we get into the action, unlike some I've read by other writers that go on just that bit to long. I like the characterisation of the 3 leads, each seem different from the others, but all fall foul of the sin of proud thinking that they are special and are the chosen one when in fact they are the same of each other with the same failings.
Lastly what does this story teach us? Never trust aliens as all they want are hot females, doubly so if you're blonde.